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IP属地:上海1楼2012-07-04 06:59回复
    1 In the past,I ate so muchu that I would burst with another bite in every meal.The desire for good health is universal.Now,I really need to lose some weight.As is known,combining exercise with the diet may be the most effective way to lose weight. Diet was a first step for me,and I will do exercises every day in the evening.


    IP属地:上海3楼2013-09-28 14:56
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      开头:Along with the advance of the society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, especially,the issue of ...... has been brought into public focus.(通用...will have great influence on our work,study and everyday life. On the one hand…, But on the other hand.)(争议性When asked about it, the overwhelming majority of people say that …. But I think/view a bit differently.)(两方面Most of us ,however,have formed a different picture of…some people think they are beneficial( tend to have a favorable attitude toward), while others hold the opposite view.)
      中间:
      两方面的(对立观点及自己观点)
      On the one hand, some people hold the view that …. On the other hand, a great many people insist that…. As for me, I agree to the former / latter idea because its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.There are dozens of reasons behind my belief. Generally speaking, the advantages can be listed as follows. First of all…. The second reason that canbe seen by every person is that…
      多方面的(原因、影响因素、解决措施)
      原因及因素:There are many reasons(factors) responsible for this case and the following are the typical ones.The first reason(factor) is that… The second reason(factor) is that ... The typical example is that ….
      解决措施: Therefore,measures should be taken to end this affair. First, government should establish some regulations to ….. What’s more, people should get ready to …. Finally, I can safely come to the conclusion that is it high time weenhanced the awareness of ….Only by these means can we succeed in solving the problem in the near future.
      结尾:After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the former view. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem will be solved in the near future.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______,and it will ensure ourselves a brighter future..


      IP属地:上海7楼2013-12-13 22:20
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